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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-03-12 11:13 PM


Ageless butterfly melodies
Flitting upon pearled kisses
And lightly spicened
With verdant stained wisdom
Spread through netted starlight.

A single lavender rose
Hides beneath swaying thoughts
Unfolding with our love
The sweetened scent of forever
Rising to caress luna's silver face.

Apparitions of golden horns
Tease just beyond the soul's eyes
The mysteries exit on forgotton hooves
Leaving the threads of my beginning
Suspended and lost to me.

Flora's feet have trod here
Upon the tides of tender green
My kin have long graced the tiny knolls
Allowing their vibrant hearts
To give life to my rainbow dreamscape.

Solace is offered here
To those who seek the summer breeze
And no embittered spirit is abandoned
Here where my peaceful dreams reign.



 *Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB


© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
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1 posted 2000-03-12 11:17 PM


I don't know why but that made me sad.... prolly cause I'm crying anyway. Very beautiful poem tho.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

Astraea
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2 posted 2000-03-12 11:23 PM


What a lovely poem...  One of your best, Alwye.  Very good.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



huney_mel
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3 posted 2000-03-12 11:26 PM


thats really beautiful......
your a great writer  
Love Mel www.melsphotoalbum.homestead.com

4eva_at_heart
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4 posted 2000-03-12 11:39 PM


wow! talk about strong use of language (of the good variety of course)
images are now fluttering through my mind.
well done!

Bec

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5 posted 2000-03-13 11:42 PM


Beautiful Krista!  I'm glad I found this before it managed to sink too far.  Your words are always poignant and well used.  Much enjoyed this lovely piece  

 Abrahm Simons

Put one foot on the path of life and tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.



Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 2000-03-14 11:20 PM


Thank you all very much.  

 *Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB


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