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I Forgive You
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I Forgive You |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
When I was young you hurt me, Called me names and teased me, I forgive you. I grew older and you picked on me, You called me gay and slanderd my name, I forgive you. You beat me up and tore my clothes, You tried to break my will, I forgive you. My friends never were very close, You made sure of that, I forgive you. I can forgive a thousand wounds, A thousand insults too, All you have to do is say, "I'm sorry, will you forgive me?" I forgive you! "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
i like this one df keep up the good work i love reading your poems "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
wonderful poem!!! it takes so much strength sometimes to forgive people - keep these great poems coming  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
heh, thanks all. I just love writting poetry, so no worries about not seeing more from me. Oh, I may not have a lot of time online this next week, so you may not see much from me till next friday. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
it's a good quality to be able to forgive well done, nice poem Bec |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It takes a very strong, very noble person to forgive those that have so cruelly hurt them. Exellent work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I'm glad you have the strength to forgive- I sure don't have it at the times I wish I did. Keep up the good work, as usual. ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Kristi, and everyone else: It does not really take all that much to forgive. All it takes is a kind heart and a willingness to swallow your own pride. I will forgive near any transgression against me, but I don't fogett it and it severely wounds the trust I would once have had for the person. Really, you should forgive others, no matter the pain they caused, it will make you feel good on the inside knowing that you were the bigger person to forgive them. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
What you said in your response above mine says more than your poem did. I like your attitude and wish more people out there felt as you do. The world would be a better place. Nice work. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
DragonFang~ I understand what you mean, I forgive so much, it's just not that easy when certain subjects come up, which I will explain to you some other time. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this piece. The message is a good one ( I agree with Danny about your responses) and the form and presentation is excellent. Keep up the good work. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Dragfang thanx so much for replying to all my poems!! I thought I would check some of yours out also and i'm very happy I did, This poem is written with such depth and it shows your true beauty with in Dana |
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