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k4u247
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 4
warrenton,va,us

0 posted 2000-03-12 11:06 AM


Never

never say i love you, if you really dont care.

never talk about your feelings, if they really aren't there.

never hold my hand, if your going to break my heart.

never say your going to, if you dont plan to start.

never look into my eyes, is all you do is lie.

never say hello, if you really mean goodbye.

if you really mean forever, then say you will try.

never say forever, because forever makes me cry.



 Only happiness comes to mind when i think of love,
thats why i cherish it. why do you?

© Copyright 2000 Kim Burkholder - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-12 11:23 AM


oh, I'm speachless.... That is beautiful. Heh, I don't know what else to say, but I really like this poem.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;)

Tara
Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76
Minnesota
2 posted 2000-03-12 04:23 PM


i really liked this one.  it's so true.  good job.
4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-03-12 05:08 PM


great job. i like this heaps!
those exact thoughts were running through my mind a short while ago
anywho........keep up the good work

Bec

*~*~*butterfly*~*~*
New Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 6
Minnesota
4 posted 2000-03-12 10:53 PM


that was BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! it is sooo true and very well spoken! i love this one..... great job!! keep it up ..... cant wait to hear more from you  

~love~
*kasandra*

"When faced with a challenge search for a way, not a way out."   -unknown

Gasper4ever
New Member
since 2003-03-01
Posts 3
virginia
5 posted 2003-03-02 08:26 PM


okay this is really good but i know for a fact that you didnt make it up yourself i've herd it in other places. but it is really a good poem

always
-Gasper's girl-

Sweetie01
Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28
NJ, USA
6 posted 2006-05-20 03:59 PM


I've heard this in other places too...but, you added a little more to it
Great Job....like to hear more from you
  Amanda<3

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-11-15 07:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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