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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
while th team is running their plays while the fans sit and drink and eat their overpriced hotdogs while the band preforms even though noone listens while the cheerlaeders jump and make themselves eye-candy for all the adolesence in the stands while these peoples lives are run by this game the people outside the field or court are getting there jobs done people who didnt make the team or squad are crying or emptying there parents med. cabnets another game is playing in another town and the same thing happens there as it happens here Dont get me wrong here i dont have anything againts sports but sports running someones life..thats wrong "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
HEY!!! People do to listen to the band. They listen to us scream and yell at the other team and make a general ass of ourselfes.  And they listen when we play too, which only happens to be when we actualy are all there and paying attention to the Peter, who isn't always there himself....Anywho, it is a very nice poem, and most of it is very true, specialy about the cheerleaders. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good poem -- so true too  |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
i liked this poem too, but the band is awesome, so don't rip on them!! jk. i don't really think that's what you were doing. i really like reading all your poems even though i don't reply to all of them. keep up the good work. |
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