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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
This poem I can't remember what I was doing when I wrote it, but it came to me and I had to write in on my hand cause I didn't have anything else to write on at the time. Sense then I've looked at it and seen many different things in it's simple lines. I can see prophecy, love, loss, and some other things. I'd love to hear what you all see in it's six simple lines. Fire falls, And fire flys, And fire all around, But when the time comes, The fire heart, Will burn itself to ground. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
i can see love and loss in this -- once again, great poem. you have so much talent, i must admit i envy you  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
heh, thanks. You are not bad yourself. Writting just comes natuarly to me, I love writing short stories too, and I'm actualy working on a novel that I hope to get published some day. Anyway, thaks for the compliment. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
hhmmm........you always seem to have this amazing way with words. i have to agree with pharon...i envy your talent great poem. good luck with the novel Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I love it, and I can see so much in just the six lines. I wish I had your talent. You don't know how hard I work to get my poetry to sound at least halfway decent... Keep up the good work. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Good job. The poem is short, but to the point. You do not need very many words to convay alot of feelings. Keep up the good work. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Jer, Krysti, Bec: thanks for the compliment on my writing, but truth be told this is one of the few poems that I wrote without having any feeling behind it. I was thinking about a phoenix or some such, and that poped into my head and I wrote it down becuase I thought it sounded cool. Anyway, I don't know about talent, about 90% of the poems I write don't turn out at all. But that remaining 10% makes it all worth while. Anywho, thanks, and I think all of you have great talent as well. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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