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Teen Poetry #2

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pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-11 02:34 AM

I have no excuse,
No reason is good enough.
I hurt you deep
But you hurt me too.

You changed so much
And i didn't know why.
I thought you didn't like me
So i started to cry.

Then the tears,
They turned to anger
And we both were mad,
For a while,

And we never did recover.
So here we are today
I have you no longer
And you are still angry.

emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

1 posted 2000-03-11 02:49 AM

this is a very touching poem well written an just plain good

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

2 posted 2000-03-11 01:32 PM

OH great, now I'm even sadder.... Oh well, it is a very nice poem, very sad, but very nice.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-03-11 02:11 PM

Nice poem. Relationships crumble all the time, and people get hurt as a result, but maybe by writing about it you will find freedom from the pain. Good job, and good luck in the future.

*There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
by me :)

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