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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
if i ran away would you chase me or wait for my return if i was starving would you give me your food or tell me to cook something if i was hurt would you hold me or tell me to suck it up if i was lonely would you love me or call me if i was sad would it be because of what you do or what you dont |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
a very nice poem, melencholy and yet in some way I can't figure out sweet. It has a nice feel to it. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
great work!!! this is very good  |
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