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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-11 01:48 AM


why do you go back to him
even though you know
he's no good for you?
sometimes i just can't
understand your way of thinking!
you worship
the ground he walks on.
he worships
nothing but the bottle.
though he beats you
time and time again
you forgive him.
i don't think this
is what God meant by
seventy times seven.
there is line,
and he's crossed it
more than twice.


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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
1 posted 2000-03-11 01:56 AM


you guys -- i have no idea where this came from, but it came to me and i try not to ignore things that pop into my head  
DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-11 02:00 AM


It is good not to ignore anything in that pops into your head. I don't, I'll get up in the middle of the night (if I'm not still up) and write a poem if an idea comes to me. I'll also write them in the middle of class, which kinda makes my teachers mad if they find out I'm not really taking notes. Anyway, it is a nice poem.
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2000-03-12 02:41 AM


hehe thats why i got D's
Reminds me of my best friends mother
(vice versa sex-wise)

pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
4 posted 2000-03-12 02:03 PM


thanx you guys(girls?) for responding  
eagle-- when are we going to see some more from you?  
talk to ya'll later. :>

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
5 posted 2000-03-12 02:08 PM


FYI: I'm a guy. Always have been always will be. Romantic to the core too, but that dosn't reall seem to matter... Ah well.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

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