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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
pain worse then a burn those who have felt know what i mean when a girl leaves you and takes your heart with her you feel like you could scream you try to fill the void with anything you can find your friends start to get annoied they say youve changed, youve lost your mind you hole yourself up in your room hiding from the daylight you hope your heart will return soon but you cry yourself to sleep every night [This message has been edited by emptyness (edited 03-10-2000).] |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
A very beautiful poem, sad tho. Very sad... |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
once again, good job. you write with such emotion. the wounds will grow over in time and you will love again. |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
THis made me very sad. I hope you don't feel like that. The poem makes me feel bad because it makes me think about how my ex boyfriend might be feeling and I have to live with the fact that I, the person who was supposed to love him, left him. If it makes you feel any better I'm sorry for your loss and I hope you find a girl who won't break your heart. Tara |
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