Teen Poetry #2 |
When I Need A Friend |
angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
You threatened to give up on our friendship, something I can't handle, just because I can't always open up. I'm sorry if I hurt you, but you have to remember that I need time to think things through, and I'll tell you what's wrong when I'm ready, not when you want to know. Don't get me wrong, it's not that I don't trust you, it's just that I've never been the most open person. I've always hid what I'm feeling until I'm on the verge of breaking, when I really need someone. Please still be there, my friend, I will turn to you, but when I'm ready. I do trust you, and I do love you, and I pray you'll be there when I need a friend. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
If the person is a true friend, he will be there when you turn to him. I don't believe a real friendship places unreasonable expectations on one person or the other. Nice expression in this piece. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem, has true emotion behind it. I think that a friend will always be there when needed, actualy, I wrote a poem today that expresses that fairly well. I hope your friend stays true. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
great job!! this one hit really close to home for me. i'm sure this person will realize that everything just takes time, if he/she is you friend, they won't rush you into telling things you don't want to. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks, all, for the sweet replies. I hope this person realizes what they're doing, and that I do love them. My friends mean so much, and I want them all to know that I'm always there, even though I can't open up to them all the time. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Awwwww.... Kristi! You know you have alot of friends here at Passions. It it was a true friend they would not be putting you through the pain you are going through now. Good luck. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jer, you can be sooooooooo sweet sometimes. I think of the person as a friend, although not as much as he supposedly thinks of me. Thank you for caring so much. YOU are a true friend, and for that THANK YOU! Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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