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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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0 posted 2000-03-09 01:40 PM


Although I hate to see
your time here come to an end,
I understand why it must be.
Goodbye, my friend.

I want you to know
you've helped me through so much;
now when I smile I glow,
Thank you so much...

I'll always be a friend to you,
Our friendship will not end,
even if your time here is through-
goodbye, my friend...

~Kristi Lynn

Jerome~ You have no idea how much you and Jer have helped me through.  Thank you for being there for me~ it means so much.  I'll miss your poetry here in the forums!     

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-09 05:26 PM


A nice tribute to your friend.
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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2 posted 2000-03-09 05:29 PM


Thanks Danny.  I just hope that he has the chance to read it, too.  
~Kristi Lynn

poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
3 posted 2000-03-09 05:31 PM


angel: quite the lovely pen you have    seems a shame to waste it on such a wretch as myself... well... i dont know what to say that i haven't already said either in my post or in the email i sent you... except perhaps to restate that i hope our friendship will not have to end due to the decision i'm making...
and now i recede into my mist again
to await another day
when my muse shall pull me
most willingly your way...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 Nothing can stop me now, cause I don't care anymore...

emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA
4 posted 2000-03-09 08:01 PM


im new here so ill say what i think could be at least a little comferting  friends will leave sooner or later and it hurts likehell but later another will come not to take his or her place but simply to help you through your pain   well enugh of that hallmark moment i hope it helped though
pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
5 posted 2000-03-09 11:08 PM


good poem -- i love to read you work b/c you have so much background and emotion!!
DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-03-10 12:12 PM


A very beutiful poem. I'm new here, but I always love to read other's works, it is sad that he is leaving and I wont have the chance to converse with him. Well, good luck in all your ventures, godspeed, and keep writing. And Kristi, I love that poem, and would greatly love to see more of your poems. I'm am very glad I found this site.
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
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7 posted 2000-03-10 09:32 AM


Jerome~
I would never end our friendship due to your decision!  I understand that you've gotta do what you've gotta do.  I just hope you'll pop in quite often to read my poetry.  *HINT*  *HINT*  I'll always stand by you, and you know it, sweetie!

Pharon~ Thank you for your compliments on my work.  It means a lot.

Emptyness~  I understand what you're saying, and thank you.

DragonFang~  Thank you very much for your reply.  I know you may not be able to converse with him, but you can always converse with me!!  If you'd like to read more of my poetry, look back some- I've been a member here since January.  I've posted a lot of poems, and I'd like for you to read them.  

Thanks all,
Kristi Lynn  

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