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sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

0 posted 2000-03-07 03:46 PM


This is what I worte right after
Aaron and I broke up.....

So what is it?
How can you describe it?
I had the feeling once,
And thought that he did as well,
But to my suprise,
He left me standing here
with a broken heart.
But hopefully he'll remember the love we had
and come back.


© Copyright 2000 Gina - All Rights Reserved
pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
1 posted 2000-03-08 02:46 PM


love is so hard to lose, but you will survive! i hope that everything works out with you and Aaron.  if it doesn't, then there must be someone else out there just waiting to be found by you  
    -- pharon --

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
2 posted 2000-03-08 03:43 PM


Thanks Pharon.  I know that one day I will be able to share everything with Aaron, and if things are meant to they will be but if not I will find someone eles.  But thanks you again.
Gina

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-08 03:45 PM


Gina~  I understand how you feel- been there, although I can't say it's hurt me as much as it has you, since Nate came around to his senses.  You always have me here if you need to talk, though, and you know that I'll always be here, through thick and thin...
~Kristi Lynn    

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-03-09 02:21 AM


Gina
The pain is great and the hurt so deep
I see your eye's begin to weep

Please don't cry or be so sad
Things might'n turn out so bad

But still I know it hurts you so
But time will heel, this I know

LoL tracie

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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