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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
You think you know me as you hold my hand, And look deeply in my eyes, No you don't! For I am a million year old secret never to be told, You think I m as pure as that morning dew, Soft and untouched , Sadly your are mistaken .. For I am that filth and hate that lives inside you, And as you walk along with me on those lovers lane Thinking for me its heaven. a life so new , You think wrong! For a lifetime ago I was here with my dead love, Who hoped and prayed like you do now! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very unique and interesting. "For I am a million year old secret never to be told". Nicely done I feel. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I find this very unique and interesting like Danny,I've read it over and over and I know I like it I just don't know if I fully understand it. So I guess it must be really great! |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
Very well done! I love this. Appearance vs. reality. great work! |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Illusion, dreaming, wistful wishing...veiling the truth there. Lovely poem. Vague, but different. Me like. ~Astraea |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Awesome poem faith! I can totally relate to this one. It has great expression of hidden emotions! I loved this line most "For I am a million year old secret never to be told" Beatiful  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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