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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
0 posted 2000-03-07 12:03 PM

hand on the soul
dripping with anger
and sadness untold
speaking for hours
to an empty,dirty room
building the loss
feeling  everything
in bright bold relief
the tomb is the world
leave a little sanity
everywhere
heaven in an eye
rigid....jaded
until the day we die..
© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238
1 posted 2000-03-07 04:47 AM

i like this.....the way you've worded it is very powerful

well done

Bec

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