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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-03-06 03:25 PM


To my dearest love I am hear.
Here to watch over you.
Here to caress you in times of need.
Yes I will still be here loving you forever.
Will I wake to find you near to me?
My love I will share beacuse you deserve it more than any other guy.
I love you.
You really don't need me but you deserve me.
These are my feelings that I cannot express.
I am shy as you know.
But I still try to show that I care for you.
I just want to say that that I love you.




 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-03-06 03:29 PM


Very sweet and sincere. Good job!

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-06 03:44 PM


Lavada~

Another heartfelt poem that I enjoyed reading...  Written for your new love?  Sorry, I forgot his name....  

So, when are we gonna wreak havoc on Passions?  *IMPISH GRIN*  Just wondering?
~Kristi Lynn

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-03-06 03:46 PM


Your poem is amazing.  It trully makes me want to cry, because its words are excatly how I feel for Aaron.  I think you did a really good job.
-Gina

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-03-07 12:17 PM


I'm sorry ya'll..I dodn't write this poem. I don't know who did either. but it wasn't me!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


jytree
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
5 posted 2000-03-08 08:52 AM


lavada it was me who wrote it.
I am the theif who took your name.
I will just say one thing next time don't leave your name and password still on the screen because people like me will use that ok.

but great poem I loved how you expressed your feelings

 The Phamtom Poet
Michael Jay
Vaughn

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
6 posted 2000-03-08 09:11 AM


Oops  

thanks Jay..all you have to do is delete mine, and enter yours..I did that with your name once!  

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


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