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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
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0 posted 2000-03-06 01:28 AM


I am
the VIP
The one who walks on the red carpet.
The one who talks with confidence.

I am
The sophisticated chick.
With my stylish moves and bodashious grooves,
I ooze my way in and out of social circles.

I am
The quiet wonderer.
Keeping my voice to a minimum,
No one can hear my thoughts.

I am
The souful sister.
Belting out the notes to all who hear,
Letting my heart run free.

I am
The one and only EJ
No one can take my place.
I am an individual.

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Johnson - All Rights Reserved
4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-03-06 01:32 AM


i like this!!!
but one thought.......you should change EJ to EGG
cya tomorrow!!

Bec

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-03-06 02:04 AM


EJ (aussie girl) this was a fantastic piece I like     tracie
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-06 12:48 PM


I liked this as well.  Brimming with confidence.  Reminds me of the song by Neil Diamond "I am, I said".
Nice poem.

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