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devil_tongue Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50 |
Why is she here? She really is a fool. Why is it that my brother, Looks at her and drools? Her brain is so limited, To giggles and "ah ha" The way that she looks at me, Is why I would murder. She is really is a twat, And no body can lie. That we all wonder now, How does she get by? Surely someone like her, Can't survive alone out there. Hopefully she will go down, For just the site of her hair. I really hate this chick, I just thought that you should know. The best thing for her to do, Is to really just go. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is an interesting piece you write. Don't understand why you dislike your brother's girl so much. Is there something about her that draws your attention to her? I thought you used good rhyme throughout. Why would her looking at you cause you to think murder??? just curious. Write more poetry soon. |
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babychicken_1 Junior Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 11 |
I thought this was excellent. I have a brother but he doesn't have a girlfriend...but my boyfriends sister doesn't like me for some unknown reason...maybe this is why. I'll just quit giggeling. =) thanks! |
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devil_tongue Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50 |
Ok I hate her so much because she has absolutely no respect for anyone rather than herself. She is totally disrespectful to my mum and stays in a bedroom with my bro and doesn't even come out and say hello or anything like that. Mum has to go in there and get her to actually say hi. The murder was in refernce to her. I would have to exterminate her....j/k. But she is such a fool and is playing my brother for an idiot. Thanks for your comments though guys.  |
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dixie_stix3309 Junior Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 11 |
This was a very good peice! I can reflect upon it in many ways. You put my feelings in your poetry. Maybe i'll write something like this. Good job! |
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