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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
My dear trusting, Fun-loving friend Can you see us At the far end? Laughing just like When we were young Running and singing In the sun Remember that old Field of flowers? Pretending we had Superpowers? That old clubhouse In the tree Falling down and Hurting me! But your heart is set It wants to fly You're leaving me Without goodbye But until together We will be Our friendship will stay here Safe with me written for my best friend, Susan Cunningham. Miss you!! ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another poem I can relate to, Lavada. My best friend, Marina, moved, too, but it was expected, because she was a foreign extange student. I just can't say that we had a field where we made up superpowers or a clubhouse that I got hurt in.  Good job...~Kristi Lynn  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
He he..me and Susan had fun..we were together since headstart..I really miss her  I hope to see her soon stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I know how you feel about missing your friend, Lavada. I miss Marina like crazy. But look on the bright side- hopefully you'll see her again soon. If I'm lucky, Marina might come here and visit for a week this summer... If it makes you feel any better, you have me as a friend, and we can make up any superpowers and hurt ourselves by thinking too much here in Passions... Just think of all the trouble we can cause..... *EVIL GRIN* ~Kristi Lynn |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
He he...I'm with you therem Kristi..I just hope we don't get caught *Grins Mischeivously* ~~Lavada Lynn~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
This is really sweet Susan is very lucky (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I know how it feels to have my best friend leave unexpectedly, but better to think of happy times rather than the day she left. Good job. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is so beautiful! I can sorta relate to this. It reminds me of my childhood friends and how we thought nothing would ever change. We never even thought about it. You used to live for the moment not the future and your poem reminded me of that. They haven't left, it's just that time can make you drift apart and when you realize what has happened it's too late! Great work as always SCG! Loved it. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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