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chic
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since 2000-01-26
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yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-03-03 09:30 AM



This feeling inside
I must explain
I want to die
and end my pain

Wanting out
I see a knife.
It's a way to die
to end my strife.

I'm gonna do it
I feel I must.
Into my chest
this knife I'll thrust.

As I do
I see a light.
I feel safe
I will not fight

I fall to the ground
the earth nearing.
So many people did me wrong
like my father, whom I'm no longer fearing.

Those who loved me
I'll truly miss.
Those who didn't led me to this.



 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-03-03 09:37 AM


Chic~
Hey, girl. You have a really good poem here, but are you sure that the moderators won't close it out on you??  Not to be rude or anything, honest!
Anyhoo, I do like this poem an awful lot, and if you ever need to talk you can e-mail me at angel6982_2000@yahoo.com.  Sound good?  GOOD.  
~Kristi Lynn

chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
2 posted 2000-03-03 09:52 AM


thanx angel...i dunno if they will or not...i just wrote it and thought i would post it...but if they think it's not suitable than i reckon they will have to do what they do

 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

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