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babychicken_1
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-03-02 09:37 PM


       girls:CAPITAL
       guys: lower case

I COME UP AND SAY I LOVE YOU,
Why is she saying this I already knew.

WHY IS IT THAT YOU WALK AWAY
I told her how I feel is that not okay?

YOU CLAIME YOU FEEL LOVE BUT IS IT TRUE
Lets talk later lets mess around thats what I wanna do.

I SPEND SO MUCH EFFORT TRYING TO MAKE IT last,
I told you I'm happy w/ us,figure it our or we'll be over real fast

WHY DO YOU SPEND MORE TIME WITH YOUR FRIENDS THAN ME
I told you I loved you we'll spend time later why can't you just see

LETS DISCUSS OUR FEELINGS,AND YOUR FEW SHORT CALLS
I'd rather sit here and scratch my #@!%$

DOES THIS OUTFIT MAKE ME LOOK REALLY FAT?
If I say yes you'll get mad if I say No you'll disagree so think about that!

INTRODUCE ME TO YOUR MOM AND YOUR DAD,
IF I die again on this game I'm gonna get really mad.

ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME? IT DOENSN'T LOOK LIKE IT
Well then theres your answer now be quite & just sit

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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-03 12:37 PM


This is cute
and true
and clever
and funny!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2000-03-03 01:48 AM


hahahahaha! I love this! Very amusing but it is all so true. Great work  

~AF~

Gadget28
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States
3 posted 2000-03-03 03:44 AM


This was real good! I wonder if that's the way guys feel sometimes? Oh well!
Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
4 posted 2000-03-03 08:33 AM


Sounds like you have been involved with the worng guys.
faith
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 89

5 posted 2000-03-03 09:12 AM


That was really nice and very very creative faith
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
6 posted 2000-03-03 10:24 AM


Cute poem.  Creative, and I bet a good chunk of the guys think like that.       
Penelope
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 31

7 posted 2000-03-03 10:09 PM


I LOVE IT!  Thanks for sharing!

-Penny

Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
8 posted 2000-03-03 11:42 PM


That was such a cute poem.  With three brothers and mainly guy friends I think you captured the way guys think really well.
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
9 posted 2000-03-03 11:50 PM


You just captured the basic part of most of the guys I have been with in my life. Great Poem  . Keep up the good work.




 ~Susie~


Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
10 posted 2000-03-04 12:05 PM


Doesn't sound like the wrong kind of guys, sounds like the typical kind of guys. This is very cute, great job.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

LoveBug
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11 posted 2000-03-04 10:25 AM


I know this type very well, but ALL guys aren't like this... just MOST of them. Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
12 posted 2000-03-04 11:43 AM


very creative.  Seems you have a good insight into a guys mind.  
Nice piece.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
13 posted 2000-03-04 01:44 PM


Hi babychicken-1

Wisdom indeed perfect poem I'm going to send my two teen girls here to get the poop, oops the scoop. I am going to have to fall down here from #6 much more often.

Thanks for the laughs,  Cerenity

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