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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-02 07:59 PM


~My Guardian Angel~ (Ode to My Brother)

Are guardians really angels?,
Not really, but my brother is,
He helps me from every angle,
Even gone still him I miss,
Hundreds of miles away,
He can still make my day,
With a call or letter,
He makes my days so much better,
He calls me Stink Bomb,
It's funny because so does mom!,
I haven't given him a name yet,
But a funny one he will get,
I like to give him "Daily Punchings",
Do you with your brother get moments like these?,
When I'm down he picks me up,
And says "Don't sit there like a big ol`lump!",
Since I was a baby he helped mom raise me,
Telling me to be strong and not to hit back until after three,
To me he is a brother and a father,
You wanna get closer than him? Don't even bother,
Because for me there is no other,
That's closer than my Guardian Angel,My Big Brother.

~JeNnYeMeShAn~

This poem is for my older brother Jonathon. He is in prison now and I miss him so much!     He has always been there for me and me for him. We share a really close relationship. The past year has been hard for me, but I've seen it through! I love you, Jonathon and I'm thinking of you!  


"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child



[This message has been edited by JennyeMeshan (edited 03-02-2000).]

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JennyeMeshan
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1 posted 2000-03-02 11:50 PM


Thankx everyone for replying...  
ME

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
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2 posted 2000-03-03 09:32 AM


Jennye~
Hey chica!  You've got a very heartfelt poem here.  I'm sorry things aren't doing the greatest.  If it makes you feel any better, I'm always here for you- like another big sister...
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-03-03 06:01 PM


Thankx Kristi for replying! I love you poem that you wrote about me!! I luvz ya like a sista!!
~JeNnYeMeShAn~

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


Penelope
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 31

4 posted 2000-03-03 08:55 PM


Having a close and loving relationship with a sibling, like you seem to have, seems to have become a rare occurrence.  I have a similar bond with my brother- he is younger though.  It must be very difficult to have your brother away from you.  I hope that things get better for you.  Thank you for sharing this piece, I can tell that it came from your heart.

-Penny

Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
5 posted 2000-03-04 12:20 PM


I really liked this poem, its something I can relate to.  My older brother is my bestfriend and protector and I wouldn't trade him for the world.  Relationships like that don't come that often in life, we should cherish them for all they mean to us.

     Steffani

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6 posted 2000-03-04 10:22 AM


This is a great poem. I've always wanted a big brother, and now I want one even more! Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
7 posted 2000-03-04 05:42 PM


everyone,
My brother is great and I"m sorry to hear that lovebug doesn't have a older brother to look up to...*hugz*...love ya all! Don't forget about the things that matter most in life..it may not be a brother but it could be a sister, your mother, or even your best friend! Don't lose faith!!
~JeNnYeMeShAn~

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


Salooma
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Posts 781

8 posted 2000-03-05 11:13 AM


This is a great poem and so sweet. I have an older brother and your poem made me realize how lucky I am to have him. Great work! Really loved it  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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