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a tribute to someone important in my life
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a tribute to someone important in my life |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
friends are something of which i have real friends are what i sometimes lack but i have a special person in my life and that would be my bestfriend she is always there when i need her most i can tell her my deepest thoughts she has this incredible power where she can read me like an open book we can whisper and talk for hours it seems there is never a moment when we don't laugh sharing stories and experiences gossiping endlessly about others tears and fears we also share she always comforts and reassures me when i'm feeling low or scared she is always the first to point out the good things but at times.....of course what is life without the but's i feel like i never fully return the friendship it seems that whenever she is feeling down and out i can never say the things that matter i remember the night the phone rang with her on the other end in tears she had lost the guy who she had thought was the one she was overcome with despair and a feeling of betrayal it was then that i realised just how helpless i was as she was pouring her heart out i realised i had nothing valuable to say or offer i just sat and cried for her i only hope that soon i can live up to the best friend role the title has always scared me i fear being trampled upon as i have been in the past her bubbly voice and nature brightens up my day her outgoing ways and humor make me grin and i can state with pride that Jen you are by bestest friend BEC Jen, this is to show you what i really think of our friendship of which i hold dear. i hope that we never come upon the crossroads of which we would have to part...and i look forward to living my dreams and ambitions with you at my side  |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
eva: while i dont care much for the awkward structure of this poem, i realize that it was written for the message and not the form, and in that respect i think your friend will be touched... so "Jen", i'm bumping this back up for you to read... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest I'm willing to die to prove my God exists Are you willing to die to prove He doesnt? --[jeff bellew]-- |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Being a best friend isn't about knowing what to say or knowing how to fix the problem. It is about being there when they need to cry. Showing them how to laugh again when they don't think that they can. A best friend is just there no matter what. Do not be afraid of it...just be there. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Bec this is a really touching poem for Jen. You should give it to her so she can read it. [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
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