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rathi New Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 2IN, USA + India+ Hong Kong |
i'm a poor poet, lonely, broken silhouette, Wish and cry all the same, fear to die Insane. Normal and Secluded, Fortunate and sadly embedded, Dream and dream a lot, Hope and desire for a fairer shot. Lazy and Boring, Fun and Jovial, Lonely and sad, Prone to be bad. Help Me! Let me help you! Let the world help itself! - Ritesh [This message has been edited by rathi (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
You have wishes, dreams, hope and the desire to help others....definately one of the richest people I have ever come across. Welcome to Passions, so glad you found us  Sheilan |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
rathi: i like this one... i have to say that the first two stanzas are far better (in my opinion) than the others... i especially like your use of the word "embedded" in line 6... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest I'm willing to die to prove my God exists Are you willing to die to prove He doesnt? --[jeff bellew]-- |
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