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sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

0 posted 2000-02-29 03:44 PM


This poem is written for my exboyfriend Aaron.

What words can describe how I feel...
Pain, Sorrow, Saddness.
My heart yearns for what I once had,
Something I once knew,
But not anymore.

© Copyright 2000 Gina - All Rights Reserved
Tara
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 76
Minnesota
1 posted 2000-02-29 11:05 PM


I like how you express how you felt.  I'm still in that pain sorrow and sadness but i hope to get over that soon.  it's short but sweet. ~Tara
First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

2 posted 2000-03-01 12:53 PM


Heart felt words in this.  Maybe you could share it with Aaron?  Sometimes males can not express what they feel but often can identify with others as they speak.  He may feel the same way.  Best wishes

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-03-01 02:49 AM


I agree with first knight share it with Aaron and see how he feels.

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-03-01 06:03 PM


hey hun!
It's me...<Jennye>....I hope you feel better as time goes by. We may not talk much at school but you know you can come to me for anything..ok?   have one of these and relax!  

Love ya!,
~JeNnYeMeShAn~

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
5 posted 2000-03-02 11:04 AM


Thank you very much.  Maybe I'll share it with him, I just don't want to look stupid or anything.
sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
6 posted 2000-03-02 11:04 AM


Thank you very much.  Maybe I'll share it with him, I just don't want to look stupid or anything.
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