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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-29 01:38 PM


why are you following me
what do you want with me
i've caved in to obscurity
isnt that enough
to just let me be
crucified by the minute
love my cross
there is no limit
to all my humanity lost..

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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-29 01:42 PM


So short and so strong.  Deep expression here. "to all my humanity lost".
Nice work.


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