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JennyeMeshan
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since 02-15-2000
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA


0 posted 02-29-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for JennyeMeshan   Email JennyeMeshan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JennyeMeshan

I heart your eyes,
that gaze into mine,
I heart your smile,
that shines brightly,
I heart you!

I heart your pure soul,
that teaches me right from wrong,
I heart your kiss,
So soft and sweet like no other,
I heart you!

I heart your embrace,
all around my body,
I heart your voice,
So deep and melting,
I heart you!

I heart your heart,
that keeps me near,
I heart your touch,
So rough yet soothing,
I heart you!

I heart your sytle,
so unqiue and free,
I heart your life,
because it's with me,
I heart you!

I heart your love,
that makes me light,
I heart your mind,
beause you know,
I love you!

-~JeNnYeMeShAn~

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Trejo - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


1 posted 02-29-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice poem. Creative style! Unique description that works.
Danny
poetry_kills
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Posts 552
new orleans


2 posted 02-29-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for poetry_kills   Email poetry_kills   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit poetry_kills's Home Page   View IP for poetry_kills

jennye: simple, yet also very deep... i like the way you proceed with ideas in this poem... and good job of being consistant to your theme...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious pries

 And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!
Honeybee
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since 12-26-1999
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Ontario, CANADA


3 posted 03-11-2002 12:52 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


This is very creative and sweet!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 11-15-2007 07:47 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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