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Master
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0 posted 2000-02-26 01:37 AM


I’ve gained weight, dreams ceased...
Now I live deprived!
Oh, my nicotine! -- how I use to thrive!
How I used to sink in you gentle mist!
How I used to dream and my dreams arrived!

Oh, my cigarettes! How I’ve held you tight!--
How I’ve sat in peace!
For the final time, let me feel that bliss!
I still think of you every lonely night!
Oh, how much I miss all the butts I’ve kissed!


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1 posted 2000-02-26 09:17 AM


I know a lot about this topic, Master. My mother, sister, and all of my friends smoke. My sister is 21 and moves like she's 80. She has been smoking since she was 14. Seeing her, my mother, and my friends hacking every day, it really turned me off to nicotine. But, don't give in to the tempation. Don't smoke again!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Salooma
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2 posted 2000-02-26 11:26 AM


There was a time when I smoked. It was the "cool thing" to do. But I realized you gotta live by your ideals not others. Great work as always Master.....  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
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3 posted 2000-02-26 03:53 PM


Well... I remember smoking. I just quit last Nov. and I have not smoked since. I really to miss it though. I still wake-up some mornings with that edge for my coffee and a Parliament. However, I chose the healthy thing to do. At least I am saving a lot of money now. Great topic Master.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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