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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I think this might be Good bye, forever Because my friendship won't matter whatsoever I’m out of your heart, now out of your eyes But to you it comes no surprise You have proved to me you never cared Since you were willing to be shared You only ignored me and put me down You made me look like such a clown You used me for my looks and money I was never really your little honey I put so much time and effort into you But you never appreciated what I would do I am very sensitive and fragile I needed your touch once in a while I let you into my heart Thinking we would never part Only in return I found who you really were And now all I want you to be is nothing, but a blur I have so much love to give And my whole life to live I just I hope I will be able to find Someone that won’t keep me in a bind Someone who won’t lure me in To another pathetic life full of sin I was only looking to be loved But instead I was just shoved Pushed away with no explanation So you could have a permanent vacation Here you go being selfish again Try to act your age, and stop being ten Face the facts of life for once Stop hiding behind the drug inside blunts One of these days you will understand When some girl won’t be willing to lend a helping hand You don’t deserve anything good Since I did all that I could You only took me for granted You never loved me, those words were just chanted I said I’d always be here for you But now I am not so sure I really want to What will you give me in return? Nothing that won’t leave me to burn You couldn’t even tell me the truth You have always lied through every single tooth I don’t even think you would be a good friend So whatever it is that we still have might just be coming to an end How can I believe if you are ever being real? Since you have never told me how you actually feel You would have to start talking Instead of running and walking If you want to stay close Give me some sort of dose The old stuff you had inside of you Those words that made me stick like glue Deep within this shattered heart I think I can pull out this painful dart We just might be able to see Us being friends like we always wanted it to be (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Well, if anyone decides to reply to this...should I give this to my X? (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This is one of my best poems I have ever written, I think. I'm reposting it, hoping that someone could give some replies THIS TIME. Thank you... (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
This was really good and heartfelt. I can't say i know exactly how you feel because i was the one who left my boyfriend. i didn't find out until a couple days ago that he had been lying to me about some things and we broke up about two months ago. so i know how the lying thing feels. but i do know the hurt you are feeling. a lot of people only think that the person who got dumped is the only person hurting but i know personally that that isn't true. i also know that sometimes it is true though and that kinda sucks. i hope you're doing ok. about showing to your ex, since i enjoy reading poetry i didn't mind that it was so long, but if he's not a person who likes poetry you should probably either give him part of it or if you're like me you have a million poems saying the same thing, find one that says the same thing but shorter. i liked your poem. it was really good. if you ever wanna talk you can email me or IM me at madonaa8. Tara [This message has been edited by Tara (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
repost... (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oh, wow. That is an awsome poem. I like much. I like. Very nice, kinda long, but very nice. Oh wow, that is just amazing. just, wow. Very long too, I would copy that into my poetry book, (have a couple others from here) but I'll just print it and tape it in. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Thank you much!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
BUMP (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
**bump bump** (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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