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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 01-19-2000
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0 posted 02-25-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

I think this might be Good bye, forever
Because my friendship won't matter whatsoever
Iím out of your heart, now out of your eyes
But to you it comes no surprise
You have proved to me you never cared
Since you were willing to be shared
You only ignored me and put me down
You made me look like such a clown
You used me for my looks and money
I was never really your little honey
I put so much time and effort into you
But you never appreciated what I would do
I am very sensitive and fragile
I needed your touch once in a while
I let you into my heart
Thinking we would never part
Only in return I found who you really were
And now all I want you to be is nothing, but a blur
I have so much love to give
And my whole life to live
I just I hope I will be able to find
Someone that wonít keep me in a bind
Someone who wonít lure me in
To another pathetic life full of sin
I was only looking to be loved
But instead I was just shoved
Pushed away with no explanation
So you could have a permanent vacation
Here you go being selfish again
Try to act your age, and stop being ten
Face the facts of life for once
Stop hiding behind the drug inside blunts
One of these days you will understand
When some girl wonít be willing to lend a helping hand
You donít deserve anything good
Since I did all that I could
You only took me for granted
You never loved me, those words were just chanted
I said Iíd always be here for you
But now I am not so sure I really want to
What will you give me in return?
Nothing that wonít leave me to burn
You couldnít even tell me the truth
You have always lied through every single tooth
I donít even think you would be a good friend
So whatever it is that we still have might just be coming to an end
How can I believe if you are ever being real?
Since you have never told me how you actually feel
You would have to start talking
Instead of running and walking
If you want to stay close
Give me some sort of dose
The old stuff you had inside of you
Those words that made me stick like glue
Deep within this shattered heart
I think I can pull out this painful dart
We just might be able to see
Us being friends like we always wanted it to be



 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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1 posted 02-26-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

Well, if anyone decides to reply to this...should I give this to my X?

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 01-19-2000
Posts 199
Massachusetts ~USA~


2 posted 03-06-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

This is one of my best poems I have ever written, I think. I'm reposting it, hoping that someone could give some replies THIS TIME. Thank you...


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Tara
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since 02-21-2000
Posts 76
Minnesota


3 posted 03-06-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Tara   Email Tara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tara

This was really good and heartfelt.  I can't say i know exactly how you feel because i was the one who left my boyfriend.  i didn't find out until a couple days ago that he had been lying to me about some things and we broke up about two months ago.  so i know how the lying thing feels.  but i do know the hurt you are feeling.  a lot of people only think that the person who got dumped is the only person hurting but i know personally that that isn't true.  i also know that sometimes it is true though and that kinda sucks.  i hope you're doing ok.  about showing to your ex, since i enjoy reading poetry i didn't mind that it was so long, but if he's not a person who likes poetry you should probably either give him part of it or if you're like me you have a million poems saying the same thing, find one that says the same thing but shorter.  i liked your poem.  it was really good.  if you ever wanna talk you can email me or IM me at madonaa8.  Tara

[This message has been edited by Tara (edited 03-06-2000).]
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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Massachusetts ~USA~


4 posted 03-14-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

repost...

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

DragonFang
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since 03-09-2000
Posts 525
Missouri, USA


5 posted 03-15-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for DragonFang   Email DragonFang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DragonFang's Home Page   View IP for DragonFang

oh, wow. That is an awsome poem. I like much. I like. Very nice, kinda long, but very nice. Oh wow, that is just amazing. just, wow. Very long too, I would copy that into my poetry book, (have a couple others from here) but I'll just print it and tape it in.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 01-19-2000
Posts 199
Massachusetts ~USA~


6 posted 03-15-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

Thank you much!  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 01-19-2000
Posts 199
Massachusetts ~USA~


7 posted 07-06-2000 01:02 PM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

BUMP


(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 01-19-2000
Posts 199
Massachusetts ~USA~


8 posted 07-11-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Oo0ostephanio0oO   Email Oo0ostephanio0oO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Oo0ostephanio0oO's Home Page   View IP for Oo0ostephanio0oO

**bump bump**


(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


9 posted 11-15-2007 07:41 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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