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i'm trying honest i am
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i'm trying honest i am |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
it kills me not to be in your loving arms, but i'm trying honest i am. it kills me not to hear your words, but i'm trying honest i am. it kills me not to see a smile on your face when i look at you, but i'm trying honest i am. it kills me not to feel your soft kiss, but i'm trying honest i am. it kills me not to say i love you, but i'm trying honest i am. i'm trying so hard that i can't get you off my mind. so please give me a sign that things will work out and we'll be fine. |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
I love this poem! It shows how much you care in this relationship or friendship! It was excellent  |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Oh, Sunshine, I understand. I hope he realizes how you feel, and I hope he sees that it's killing you inside. I'm always here, and you know it. I know exactly how you feel... ~Kristi Lynn        |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Thank you for the nice response. I wrote that poem for my now exboyfriend. I still care a lot for him even if it seems like I know longer exist to him. I just hope that things will either work out or that I'll be able to be his friend. Yet I still am really confused about the whole thing. |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Thanks Kristi I hope he and I will work everything out but only time will tell. And to tell you the truth I'm still not too sure about that. But thanks for everything. I really mean it, god only knows how sick and tired you must be of hearing the same old story over and over again.....so thanks!! |
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