Our Bleak Moment Of Perfection

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-LeAnn-
Junior Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 13
San Antonio,TX

0 posted 2000-02-21 09:09 PM

As We Sit Here
We Listen To Each Other
Breathing With The Passion
Wondering If The Moment
Could Ever Reach A Higher Perfection……

But Then We STOPPED
The Moment Was Gone
And We Said With A Smile & Deep Sigh
Maybe We Were…… Just Meant To Be……
FREINDS………

And This Was………
Our Bleak Moment Of PERFECTION

-LeAnn-
Junior Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 13
San Antonio,TX

1 posted 2000-02-21 09:20 PM

I'm sorry about that poem…… it doesn't
make sense… it doesn't rhyme or sem to
have a point… & its beyond confusing in
its simplicity!!!! I have NO CLUE WHY i
posted that…… SORRY!!!
<img src="http://netpoets.net/img/ms02.gif"
peace

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-02-21 10:04 PM

It does too make sense...either that or I'm crossing over to the crazy side and deciphering the undecipherable. DON'T SCARE ME!! And who says poetry has to rhyme? I liked it.

"The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

3 posted 2000-03-01 12:43 PM

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme,
this makes perfect sense.
Unforunately
I understand, and I'm sure many people do.
It's just kind of sad that people go to that level to realize what they probably already knew.
And in this world the way it is today, all the dangers and disease this is a very powerful topic to bring up and should be brought up more often.
Well done.

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

4 posted 2000-03-01 02:14 PM

Sadly, I understand perfectly. Beautiful poem.

"The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

5 posted 2000-03-01 04:14 PM

I liked it as well. I think that moment of perfection came with an understanding that you two truly knew that friendship was more important than other outcomes from moment.
Good stuff......

babychicken_1
Junior Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 11

6 posted 2000-03-02 07:03 PM

I thought you showed a lot of emotion in this piece and you did a very good job. Keep up the good work.!

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