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In the Back of My Mind
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In the Back of My Mind |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
In the back of my mind I see a love, A love that has been so far and fair, Someone once so special, Tragedy struck and was broken, In the back of my mind he stands. In the back of my mind I see a loss, A sad goodbye that was so in heart, Someone now so distant, Tears of sorrow fall over my cheeks, In the back of my mind I see. In the back of my mind he stands I see, A dream out of no where comes to be, Something I really don’t understand, Thoughts spin around in confusion, Sadness again comes to this forgotten face, I glance, I look, his forgotten embrace, As if we are together again, In relief to me cause now I see, But I ask: “Does he still love me?” Jennye T. "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
this was a beautiful poem... very omniscious sentiments... great job! Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable... -------823------- |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jennye~ I think this is one of your best poems that I've read. I love it to death!!!  I hope all goes well, chica! Love ya, Kristi Lynn  |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
This poem is so good, it brought tears  to my eyes, sorry, I'm very sentimental  , but I truly loved your poem b/c I've felt the same way before! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...what a beautiful poem.... It's really nice. Hopefully you post more so we all can read them. Great job!  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Thankx everyone for your input! I appeciate it! Jennye T. "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Sara Junior Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 27LaCrosse WI, United States |
This was a very sentimental, touching poem. I really like this poem. I'm new so I haven't had a chance to see much of anyones work. I'll look forward to another from you. |
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