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After Dark

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hoppy
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A dream came to me last night in bed
It was a complex disorder of confusion and dread
I walked down the darkness where light could be felt
Nothing could talk but at my foot they all knelt
Asking in tounges not known to me
I only marvled at what my eyes could now see
I lifted my head to see a whole in the light
It was a woman steping out into my sight
I walked into the dark light to touch her hand
Like i was acting on an unsaid command
In her eyes all the worlds i could see
She spoke and said, do you want to be with me
She reached inside me and took hold of my heart
And till this day i dream this dream everynight after dark

 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity."

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 02-21-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Interesting read!  Good rhyme and resolution!
Danny
Salooma
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2 posted 02-21-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Very nice.....I like the rhyme too. Great job!

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."
Anvrill
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3 posted 07-27-2002 10:38 AM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

I am so thinking of succubi right now... And have Type O Negative's Haunted stuck in my head... And want to congratulate Lilith for creating the standard for such images in the first place.

Very cool poem.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz


4 posted 11-01-2002 03:31 AM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quietlydying

pip sure has come a long way.

good write.

it's nice to see some of your earlier work.

/jen/

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Artic Wind
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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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