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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-20 02:32 PM



My heart is full of happiness,
I can't stand up straight,
You kiss me and my knees go weak,
I told on tight to stay here,
With you is were I wanna be,
Come to me I am real,
You're body feels so good,
I beg you not to let me go,
You make me laugh so hard,
I can hardly breathe,
We have so much fun together,
It's like a dream come true,
I feel like I"m on top of the world,
When I"m with you it's like cloud 9,
We make love and he holds me close,
and looks in to my eyes,
Saying "You're so beautiful,
I don't want this night to end,
but I must go. I will see you again."
I can't get him out of my mind,
and the scent of his cologne,
He is the perfect man for me,
I just know he will come back.

-Jennye T.



 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-02-20 10:17 PM


Very sweet!  Great sentiments with this.  I can definitely relate.  Keep up the good work!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-02-21 09:23 AM


Jannye~
Hey, I hope all works out well between you and Matt.  He's a sweetie and a cutie!!     Your poem was great, it says everything you've been telling me and so much more..
~Kristi Lynn

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 08:54 AM


Thankx everyone for replaying to my poem! It lifts my spirits when people give me good comments about my hard work....bye!  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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