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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-02-20 12:07 PM



You look back on your past and see the things
That could have been you, but are now me

You look upon me as if I were a fond memory

but I was never your past

You have all the riches of the world

But still you look at me as though I were all you have

You see me as your love that has died but you never loved

I am the thoughts that come to you in the night, haunting you to the point of insanity

You think of me as the constant reminder of wrongs and shortcommings

But I am not the monster, I am only your mind


 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity."

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
-LeAnn-
Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13
San Antonio,TX
1 posted 2000-02-20 01:18 AM


GOOD JOB!!!!!!
THATS A GREAT POEM………
ºahemº i totally feel what ur saying in that poem!!
Keep 'Em Coming!!!

Yupperz……
HURRY UP!!!!!
ºwaitsº
i dont have all day u know………
LOL
hehe
POST MORE POEMS……
I WANNA READ MORE FROM U¡!¡
L8rz

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-20 09:52 AM


That's a really nice poem. i really liked this one. I can totally relate to this. Good luck! Keep smilin'  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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