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my heartache world |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
My heart is aching with the knowlege we may never be together, Crying in front of this monitor and watching you slip away, I was at my peak where I was going to say yes and let us be one, Your family hates me and I know you can't see me go,but I will miss you, You were my best friend, my counciler, my heart and soul, I should have took you in my arms when I had the chance to do so, I"m sorry I let you down and left you hurting and crying, but it's not my fault, it's not my fault, they don't want me and they won't except me, where am I going to find someone else like you?, My own world seems strange to me because you have disappeared, Our love was kidnapped by your brother and your sister, they don't know me but they insist I go, so I went, they thought I would hurt you and leave you lonely but I would have loved you so much! -Jennye T. I never thought my past would come back to haunt me, but it did and I'm lost and I dont' know what to do! If thou can wait then thou shall stay |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
WoW! This is very well-done and powerful. I'm sorry you're so down about it.  Hopefully in the future you'll be able to look past others' objections and go where your heart leads you. good luck "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
It seems the past is always out there waiting to raise its head and disrupt our lives. Keep your plans and dreams and don't let the past hold you back. Be bold and decisive and you will develop confidence that will support you in tough times. Please continue writing! Danny |
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