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Do You Remember? |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Do you remember when I told you about someplace special to me, about the only place I knew I could go to express my feelings? Do you remember when I said it meant the world to me? That even though no one knows who I am, they still care about me? Do you remember when I showed you my special place, when I gave you the key to my feelings, and trusted you to see them, but not to interfere? Do you remember when you knocked down the walls of this place, only for them to land on top of me? Or how you've wreaked havoc on my emotions? You've destroyed my sanctuary... ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Nice poem. Kind of sad though. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job. I know just what you’re talking about. That’s why I don't tell many of my personal aquantices of this special place. However, this is just my opinion. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Hey great poem....it's so sad though and I guess it's true. Although you may think that you can trust a person with so much of what you feel and what you think, it's actually pretty hard for them to realize how much it actually means to you. That's happened to me once, but thank god not with Passions. This is the only place where I can post and feel comfortable posting. It's great. Salma |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you all for your replies... Jer~ I only showes him passions because he wanted to read some of my poems, and I told him flat out that it meant a lot to me, and that I didn't want him to do anything more than read my poetry. I guess I know who to trust.. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Anglefire New Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 7somewhere real close |
I did not know that i did that to you i feel awful and will never be here again i just wanted to see your work and the emotion you put into it. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
AngleFire~ It's okay that you're here, but you just hurt me so much, and when I told you about Passions, I told you what it meant to me, and I thought you would actually take into consideration how I would feel if you were to disrupt it. I don't mean to hurt you, and you know that... ~Kristi Lynn  |
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