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(throwing some nonsense at ya)
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(throwing some nonsense at ya) |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
#1 the white whale's coming old ben ain't dead there a sick bee humming all through your head jostle it around, will it come out? sit on the ground maybe i can help #2 heil the fourth reich the 5-0 got mike he's down and out and all about but that's okay there'll be another day and when that day dawns will hope be gone, or will the cat be back with a big mac attack? #3 like humphrey bogart in neon shades life goes on a turn of the page |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Interesting bit of nonsense there. Glad it is nonsense cause I couldn't make heads nor tails of it..lol. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
HUH?????? Interesting.... Ummm, yeah..... ~Kristi Lynn  |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
rich-pa: you know what's scary? i actually made some sense out of that... i like the way you numbered the stanzas... very suave  anyway.. good work... and i'll be sure to keep an eye out for that cat that's after my big mac *locks his burger-vault tight*sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
the numbering worked out i guess, but it was supposed to be seperate poems...i might leave them as a whole though...jerome, i figured you could make some sense out of it...i made perfect sense out of them, they do have meaning |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well, as much as I liked this, I have no idea what the meaning is. Maybe you and jerome need to be locked in the "burger vault" together so you won't be loose on the streets. (joking, of course)Cool.  "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahh... I like your random babbalings. It shows a artistic form of creativity. Good job. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
ah! I love humphrey bogart!!! Sorry...but i do. he didn't wear green shades though...well I hope he didn't  Anyways pretty interesting stuff ya got here....I bet it's pretty understandable to you, but it's nice to have poetry like that once in a while. Keep writing so we can keep reading. Salma |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i'll run ya'll the dl on the gist of the poems there the white whale's coming old ben ain't dead there a sick bee humming all through your head jostle it around, will it come out? sit on the ground maybe i can help the white whale is moby dick, old ben is the bear from william faulkner's the bear. the sick bee is a corruption. 'nuff said. i'm helping the person heil the fourth reich the 5-0 got mike he's down and out and all about but that's okay there'll be another day and when that day dawns will hope be gone, or will the cat be back with a big mac attack? first two lines are inspired by a friend who had just gotten a ticket..it was all inspired by him, 'cause he was bummed about it...i then painted a little message of hope using a big mac and that song "the cat came back, the very next day, oh the cat came back, they thought he was a goner..." oyu know the song like humphrey bogart in neon shades life goes on a turn of the page now i know humphrey didn't wear neon shades but it sounded goood so went with it. ok? good rich-pa |
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