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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 2000-02-16 02:34 PM


When I walked up on the street
My face blushed when you smiled.
I couldn't hold in that I liked you
so conversation joins us now.
Only once did I ever see you,
but nightime talks tell me so much about you.
We laugh at each others jokes
and listen to each other breath.
All our plans to see each other again
and what will happen are so carefree.
No tension about our diffrences
just a sence that we are honest together.
I wont say sweet thoughts that haunt me
instead I hide how I feel.
You have experienced so much more then I
and I long to know all thoughts of me.
What will change when I see you,
will you like what you see.
I cant even connect your face with your voice,
you seem to casual to be so deep.
What are your intentions with me,
and I just another girl to tease.
Do you really want my freindship
or is it all a plight for sex?
Who is to say taht I would give out,
insead you make me reserve myself.
What will come of this whole situation,
and how will we react?


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<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~


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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
1 posted 2000-02-16 08:19 PM


Ohh... Maitay! This was so wonderfully beautiful! I know how this is. I have been in the situation before. Great Job!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-17 08:49 PM


I really like this.....been there too many times to say.    I'm totally able to understand your meaning and I hope you get it resolved. (hopefully favorably) Good job!

 "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

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