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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-15 10:29 PM



This Valentine I'm about to give you
Contains no words at all
It's somthing very special to me
And I really hope you take it
With open eyes to see
Just how much I love you
And hope you love me too
This thing I'm about to give you
Is my.......
Virginity.

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poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-02-16 12:57 PM


nikki: *quite frightned* i certainly hope you realize what you're doing... i can't say that i condone your "gift"... i can only say that i hope and pray whoever recieves it will appreciate it for what it's worth and not only take the gift that you offer now, but also your entire self in love and in a serious relationship...

sincerely,
jerome the mortified priest

p.s. -- this is a gift you can only give once... be wary and selective of the one to whom you give it...

[This message has been edited by poetry_kills (edited 02-16-2000).]

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
2 posted 2000-02-16 07:50 PM


Ohh.. yes. I agree with Jerome. He has said everything so well, I echo his comments. I stand in the same asspect as him!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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