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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-02-15 11:42 AM


On this Valentines day,
I think how you are there for me.
Your sweet pretty face is always welcome,
your such a sweetie.

Your sparkling brown eyes,
and enlightening smile.
Taking time to listen to your thoughts,
is always worth while.

When Im low your there,
saying dean you can withstand the storms rain.
Always trying to feel my thoughts
helping me heal the pain.

If your ever feeling down,
come cuddle with me.
Don’t forget with me,
that’s all it has to be.

One thing I want to leave you with is,
your a beautiful ladie.
But after your beautiful eyes and face,
comes a different place ,
and that’s your heart,
the most beautiful heart of all.



 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-15 11:49 AM


Great poem Dean So uplifting...it's great to have a shoulder when you need it isn't it? I feel as if I need one right now... Oh well..I'll make it! Wish me luck!  

stay cool Dean

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
2 posted 2000-02-15 08:15 PM


Thanx alot college girl!! I just wanna say thank you for supporting all my work. I love your work!! I always read it when i'm not busy!!

"I Love all who are positive and who are positive to me"

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-02-15 08:27 PM


Wow! This is so sweet. I'm glad to hear a guy finally praise brown eyes.......most guys rave about blue eyes, and mine are brown! Good job.

 "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
4 posted 2000-02-15 09:50 PM


I want to say thank you to lyricfetish for supporting all my work!! To bad you couldn't send me a pic so I could know the what the face behind the name looks like?

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
5 posted 2000-02-16 07:09 PM


Ahhh ... Dean! It's so nice to see that your posting again. It has been awhile since your last posts. This was great.

Ohhh.. and girls, I think green eyes are way better then blue!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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