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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
They throw you You catch'em They fall You pick'em They'll listen You talk They tell You cry What happened? They threw you What happened? You caught'em You're playing this game again Trying to be careful Uh,oh the game starts to begian You gotta be dareful You caught'em They throw you You drop'em You're careful. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This was interesting. Couldn't get a meaning but maybe it wasn't necessary. Nice use of recurring phrases. Danny |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
That's something to think about. I didn't really understand it, can you explain it? Salma |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
It is about picking your friends. Sometimes you get friends that turn their back on you and you let them,at the end of the poem it shows that you are careful about picking your friends so you drop the ones that turn their back on you. |
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-LeAnn- Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13San Antonio,TX |
talk about hidden meaning…… takes a true poet 2 get THAT ºahemº "hidden"…… & stuff………  GOOD JOB¡!¡ U made me think…… i like that in a poem…… BRING ME MORE!!!!!! woo hoo I CANT WAIT!! hehe L8rz |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow....now after rereading it....I can actually understand it. That's really good. Thanks for the explaination.  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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