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Master
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-02-14 10:02 PM



Love is a rose that grows unveiled
Love’s beautiful in all her forms
Love is the crown made of thorns
Love is a cross to which I’m nailed

Love is a rose that grows in vain
Love is the petals on the ground
Maturing paciently and proud--
A cross that dangles on my chain

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-02-14 10:11 PM


Exquisite and so lovely..

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-15 12:13 PM


Thankyou for the reminder of what true love is. And great wording. Way t'go!!

 "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
3 posted 2000-02-15 12:16 PM


Great poem man!!! Keep up the good work.

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA
4 posted 2000-02-15 06:35 AM


Thank you all! Glad you liked it!
peanogrl83
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since 1999-12-04
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5 posted 2000-02-15 11:39 AM


Beautifully said! (as always.. :.) )
                    Vreni

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
6 posted 2000-02-24 11:29 AM


Wonderful!  I enjoyed once again...
~Sarah

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
7 posted 2000-02-24 03:48 PM


Another wonderful poem.  I'm starting to look forward to more of your poems...
~Kristi Lynn  

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
8 posted 2000-02-24 03:56 PM


What a great poem.  This one is definatlly gonna have to get printed out and given to my now ex boyfriend.  It really is good.
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
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9 posted 2000-02-24 04:47 PM


This is soooo beautiful Master! I really liked this one of yours. You should post more often really....great! Really great!

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
10 posted 2000-02-25 01:46 AM


Your description of love is so wonderful. It shows how love can be so lovely, yet it can also hurt at the same time. Great job Master as always.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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Limbo
11 posted 2000-02-25 03:56 AM


Good job Master. I always love reading your work. Bravo

~AF~

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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Massachusetts ~USA~
12 posted 2000-02-25 08:31 PM


This was very touching. There's so many meanings of love, and you wrote some of the beautiful ones.  

ps>I'm doing the same thing as Sunshine17 did. Maybe my X will get it now, and stop throwing the word LOVE around.


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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