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LoveBug
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0 posted 2000-02-14 09:18 PM


So, it’s Valentine’s day again
And here I am, alone
Maybe it’s not meant to be
Maybe I was destined to be alone
Living in a dream world
That will never come true

I see my friends
Getting flowers, candy, and kisses
They are kind to me
But it’s not the same
It just isn’t the same

If only I could have him hold me
And have his eyes look into mine
I would give anything for that
But it’s just not meant to be
I’m destined to be alone

If I must be alone
I wish I could stop dreaming
Dreaming an impossible dream
Can’t my mind rest?
Can’t I stop the torture?

No, no one can stop the torture
No one but him...
And that will never be
So, I will always be alone for Valentine’s day
And every other day of the year

I’d better get used to it... easier said than done




 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

© Copyright 2000 Erica N. - All Rights Reserved
rachella
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1 posted 2000-02-14 10:17 PM


I completely understand. Thank you for writing this. I needed to know that someone else is where I am, but today was actually good for me because I was a secret admirer
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In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-02-14 10:19 PM


Oh Love Bug, you'll find him.  From what I can see, you're a sweet and loving person.  What guy in his right mind could resist that? (there are many guys not in their right mind, yes I know, but some are!).  Great work, and keep up the hope!  You'll have your valentine someday, I'm sure of it!  

 *Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

Jer
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3 posted 2000-02-14 10:54 PM


ahhhh... Erica! You can be my Valentine. I don't have one yet! I'm in the same boat you are in. Just be thankful not everyone is. (That boat would sink if it was true.)<!signature-->

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Singer1981
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4 posted 2000-02-15 09:48 AM


Well...I will join you all in that boat.  It's nice to know that others know just how I feel.  Really great poem once again Lovebug!
~Sarah

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5 posted 2000-02-15 05:00 PM


Thanks for the nice comments, everyone! They made my day!  

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Smore
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6 posted 2000-02-15 10:29 PM


you know, I have a boyfriend, and he didnt give me those things, he treats it like any other day, I find myself thinking I'd rather tell people I have no one then to tell them my guy won't even emphasize one time what I mean to him.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

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7 posted 2000-02-16 12:55 PM


lovebug: a well-written depiction of Single-Person's Awareness Day... i like it quite a bit and i hope you find your prince  

sincerely,
jerome the melancholy priest



 Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
--[billy corgan]--

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