Teen Poetry #2 |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
I watch you move full of grace, Dim light showing beauty's face. Moving to the little child, asleep in bed Wished her sweet dream and this is what you said. My baby girl as i watch you sleep, Into your bedroom i had to creep. Despite fear of waking you I had to see The great miracle God gave me -Hoppy <!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die.</font> [This message has been edited by hoppy (edited 02-13-2000).] |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
This is a very heartfelt poem. Good job, but I think maybe you wanted to say "full of grace. " Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This was a very nice poem. It made me feel kinda warm in my heart...hehe |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Wow, this is so sweet! It's very different from most of your work that i've read, but I like it. And I like the subject you chose to write about. |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
thanks i usually don't write things quiet like this one but it poped into my head one day so i wrote it down. Just a note, i've never accually seen this, it was just a visualizaion i had in my mind, don't have a kid or anything. but i'm glad you liked it "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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