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Untrue Love? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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“She won’t come between us”, Is exactly what you told me. But another girl admits her crush, And now its seems as though she will. I sit here every day, With a broken heart. I always thought you loved me, Please, tell me I didn’t think wrong. I have always loved you, And I will love you until I die. If you had not left so soon, You would see love in my eyes. Everytyme I think of you, My heart expands with love. Only for you, And you alone. My friends surround me, Giving all sorts of advice. They know the situation, And are always there when I cry. They wipe away the tears, And hold me close when they fall. It seems like I've loved you forever, And no matter what, I will go on loving you. *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?* -pom16pom- |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
tamma: pray tell, what angelic being is this that can inspire such strongly avowed love in you? sicnerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Yes... do tell tamma! This was great piece of writing! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I wrote this the day after my bf said he wanted to see other people, "but still date" but then he asked me to forgive him for suggesting such a thing "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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