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Nights
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 56


0 posted 2000-02-10 04:49 PM


Tell the world how you feel
And they'll laugh in your face
Mad men, psychos, depressants
Have all been in your place


 "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh
it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE

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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-02-10 05:12 PM


Maybe, but you still need to let out how you feel every once in a while.  I like your poem, but it sorta makes me feel like everyone thinks my feelings aren't important, even if they are.  Keep up the good work...
~Kristi Lynn    


 "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me

hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

2 posted 2000-02-10 05:15 PM


nice work night!!  

you can tell anyone how you feel, but noone really cares, they just shake their head and give you slant glances and condime you to the dark side of their mind.

i like

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rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
3 posted 2000-02-10 05:55 PM


i can see what ya mean yo, and good little poem

rich-pa

poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
4 posted 2000-02-10 08:18 PM


nights: another beautiful piece... i've felt this way often *heh*... though i think i'm working my way up to being one of the madmen nowadays... my roomate is training me...   but *shhh* you didn't hear that from me. . . . .

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge



Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
5 posted 2000-02-11 06:15 PM


Great job. Short, effective, and to the point!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
6 posted 2000-02-11 07:33 PM


Short and to the point---I LIKE IT----keep up the great work---i cant wait for your next one.
-Ender

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