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S3NSATION18
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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-02-08 11:16 AM


I KNEW THAT NIGHT WOULD CHANGE EVERYTHING
MY SOUL, MY ATTITUDE,MY WAY OF THINKING
BASICALLY EVERYTHING ABOUT ME.

NOW THAT IT HAS IT'S GETTING EVEN HARDER TO DEAL
I GAVE YOU SOMETHING PRECIOUS TO ME
BUT STILL WE COULD NEVER BE.

I GOT PROBLEMS AND SO DO YOU...
MAKING IT EVEN HARDER TO KNOW WHAT TO DO
WHY DOES IT MAKE ME FEEL SO BLUE??

I KNEW THAT NIGHT WOULD CHANGE EVERYTHING...
BUT FOR A LIFE TIME?
HOW COULD THIS BE?



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-02-08 12:18 PM


S3NSATION, I'm not sure what you did on that night, but if it's what I think, it won't change everything for the rest of your life. You'll always remember~ good or bad~ but it will pass. Love yourself, it's ok. -SEA
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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2 posted 2000-02-08 01:02 PM


It will change everything. . . we may not want it to. . .but it does. . . but like SEA said, you have to love yourself. . . this memory will always be with you. . .but it will pass. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

3 posted 2000-02-08 01:17 PM


I'm assuming what you did on that nite was what I think, and to tell you the truth, I've been in the same boat and still struggle through it. Trust me honey, it's ok, sometimes we make mistakes and sometimes actions with the best intentions backfire. I love your poem and I feel for  you. E-mail me sometime if you ever need to talk. Hang in there, it's not the end of the world, your entire life is still ahead of you, and someday you will have many other nights as well.

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all.

poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
4 posted 2000-02-08 01:47 PM


sensation: if you "changed" what i percieve that you changed, then i can understand how it would impact you so much... few people realize the implications and consequences (emotional and physical) of such actions... it's sad really...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge



Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-02-08 05:56 PM


Life happens one day at a time.  Each day brings growth, understanding, and a chance to be better than we were.  Nothing lasts forever, and you will get beyond your problem.  Trust yourself!
DH

Majestic
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
6 posted 2000-02-08 10:20 PM


It seems we all have regrets...But they only have power over you if you let them...very expressive ....thanks for the read...and sharing...

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
7 posted 2000-02-09 01:25 PM


WEll that was a great poem. I must say that I had a similair incident not long ago. I know exactly what that feels like, and would love to talk to you. I tried to find your email, but it wasn't posted. COuld you just email me some time.
                Amber

 ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



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