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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-02-08 10:21 AM


**The Road to Love**
The passage to your heart
I had to travel it
Not because I had to
Because my heart told me
That by traveling that path
Going down that road
Would lead me to a beauty
Greater than all other beauty
Incomparable in its own ways
And that this beauty would belong to an individual
An individual that would share their feelings
Provide a helping hand
Show respect obtainable no other way
And reveal a love that is invincible
To great for any evil
Any trouble that could come this way
For there is a bond that comes with this love
A bond that cant be broken
Ignored
In any way
For it is a stronger power than anything
And everything in this world
And you know something
When I took that path
When I traveled that road
I knew that my heart was right
And that what I was doing
The passage I was taking
Was the right one
And that I made the best decision
Ever



© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-08 10:30 AM


great poem ender! I've travelled that road lots of times..finally I've travelled down the road to the heart of the right guy...wish me luck!  

~~Lavada

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
2 posted 2000-02-08 10:34 AM


sweetcollege_girl-
      I too have traveled that road, but i have always gotten hurt.  i am still looking for a new road to travel though, and i hope that it is the right one.  but, good luck with your road traveling.  I hope it turns out the best for you.
                  -Ender

SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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with you
3 posted 2000-02-08 12:23 PM


Ender, great poem! You need to stop looking for the right road to walk down and trust your heart to guide you to it when you are ready and not a moment before! The wait seems forever, it's quicker than you think. I promise.:> -SEA
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-02-09 04:56 PM


Jerome was being very nice when he closed your repost of this piece. I have deleted the thread and I would like to let you know, in the future the reposts will be deleted. We have limited disk space and we appreciate your respect for the other authors. when you use up the precious space for reposts, they can not post original pieces.

Thanks for your co-operation.

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