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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I've never been happier Than I am at this moment You've given me everything When you gave me this ring Together foever We will be I love you And you love me You hold my heart In your hands And you always will For we were meant to be Together forever We will be I love you And you love me I wrote this last night after me and my fiance' finished talking...I haven't showed it to him yet, I'd like ya'lls opinion first  kinda nervous about showing it to him.. he's never seen any of my poetry..not even the ones about him!  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sweetcollege_girl, of course you should show it to him. It's an expression of your feelings for him. It's quite sweet. I wouldn't overwhelm him with too many at once, but every once in a while break one out and read it to him.  -SEA |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Of course you should show him! It's a wonderful poem, showing him your true feelings. But, like SEA said, don't show him too many at once, it may get overwhelming. You know, last night I finally took the risk to show my poem, "More Than Friends?" to the guy I wrote it for. Now we're closer than we were before... ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
are ya'll engaged though..not that it matters, but I kind of feel weird showing other people my poetry...especially ones about them...if you know what I mean (kristi) But I will try.. ~~Lavada Lynn "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
go for it yo, show it to him. it was a very beatiful poem which i'm sure he'll love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Who better to share your poetry with than the man you're going to share your life with? *S* Nothing makes a person feel quite as good as knowing they've made some they love happy... and your poem is an excellent statement of your happiness... show it to him... or as SEA suggested, read it to him! *S* |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks all...I will! Stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
scg: this is lovely i'm so very happy for you and your fiance... i'm sure you'll be very happy together... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
great read....a beautiful gesture of trust.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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