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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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some body kill me please??? Im on my knees,prety pretty please Kill me,i want to die put a bullet in my Eyes,just kill me |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Sorry you feel that way. But don't do anything you'll regret or you won't even live to regret. You tend to live through those things. Salma |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
its an adam sandler song,i jus fgelt like that now |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I can identify with this poem, I feel that way every other day, I just hope that you aren't completely serious about following through! "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
im not |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
This was pleasent! lol. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
mike: um...  yeah... the form is good, but the subject is a little gruesome... i can see adam sandler doing this though... keep an eye out for crazy spoon-head man *waa haa haa*sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Well now that you have me singing the song LoL and I know you arent goign to follow through with this I am fine LoL. But (IMHO) if you felt like this you should have written something yourself, and posted that instead! I know there are a lot of songs out there to describe our own feelings, but they arent ours. Just my opinion. I am sorry you felt/and or feel like this, and if you need to talk, I am here! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
hmmm I guess I forgot to mention this forum is for original works. Anything that is not yours can not be submitted here without proper notification. We must give credit where credit is due. Generally we frown on posting anything that is not original but some members in open have (but have posted that the author was unknown or who the author was). I hope this does not happen again. If it does I am afraid we will have to delete. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey now, when I read this I was about to tell you that I have the Wedding Singer soundtrack and that I knew Adam Sandler sings it. So, I guess I'm thinking if you were feeling like crap maybe you should have composed your own little poem about despair that was inspired by his song. Just a thought. But since you did give the author credit, no harm done i guess. NEVER do it again though.....(joking) Anyways, hope to read more from you in the future  |
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